Ad wording help please

[Cop-Pop]

How would you word an advert for a pony that is defo not a novice ride (big attitude, only just broken in) but is small so only a very small adult/teen or a child can ride it? He's a great little pony and would go far in the right hands but he must go to an experienced home. How do we word the ad without making him sound like a psycho?

 

[KirstySeaman]

lovely friendly pony, will go far in the right hands but very green at the moment due to just being backed, would suit a very small adult/teen or an experianced, confident child. please no timewasters, needs to go to an experienced home.

then just put in age, height, price etc..??

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xx

 

[Toby_Zaphod]

I agree with Kirsty, & also take some specific photos to go with the advert. Many adverts don't do well because the photos used aren't any good. family pictures etc.

 

[Faithkat]

Totally agree and particularly with regard to photos. I sold my mare recently and used a website that enabled me to put up five photos so I used a really good "conformation" shot, two of her jumping and doing flat work (ridden), one of her being lunged and one with the foal she had last year. The lady who bought her (first person to come and see her) said that it was photos that got her really interested as they were so good. She complained that far too many people use just a head shot or blurred "family" snaps.