Advert help please :)

[SatansLittleHelper]

Im advertising my horse and all I have had is a load of people asking and then saying they will get back to me...and dont. I appreciate its a naff time of year etc but I dont know if Im wording the ad right or if the price is right.
Is there anyone who would mind me sending them the ad for a critical eye over please?? X

 

[be positive]

You can send it to me if you don't mind it possibly being pulled apart!

 

[GlamourPuss86]

Send it over

 

[Meowy Catkin]

I'l have a look if you like.

 

[Lolita]

I'll have a look if you like

 

[Pigeon]

Me too