also, seriously, what do you think his chances are of finding someone. I wanted to be completely honest about him, so i know if they are truley interested. i just hope we can get someone who is experianced enough for him.
I think you are only being fair to Charles to warn a future home properly about what they will be taking on. It is so nice to see someone actually telling the truth! I think you need to add a word or two about why he is lame so that people will not think it will cost them a fortune in vet bills.
I 3rd the lame comment - perhaps you could cut down the text a little as you seem to be repeating. Basicaly a prospective loaner needs to know they have to be boss, he may bite and can be grumpy. I would also perhaps put more emphasis on his good points, which to my mind make him a good bet for anyone who is a competant horse handler. I hope you find him a good home.