Anyone got 5 mins to spare?

[La Fiaba]

I really need a favour, wont cost you anything but 5 mins of your time. All I'm asking is for a few people to read through some things I wrote and tell me whats bad about it! If you love to give critisism, this is your moment peeps! PM me for the details. Cheers me dears, nice glass of brunello waiting for all who participate (you have to come round my house to get it though)

 

[LittleBlackMule]

If you want a proof reader I don't mind helping out.

 

[FanyDuChamp]

Have PMed you.
FDC

 

[La Fiaba]

Thanks to all who have helped so far, still room for improvement I'm sure, so don't be shy kids!

 

[showqa]

Sure - I'll do it for you. PM me with the details.

 

[**Vanner**]

I'll happily have a look