Can I have some constructive critism please?

[DottyConnection]

Hi all,

Have qualified for the semi-final of Miss England and have got to put a DVD together, so thought I would use footage of my lovely pony! Have got to add some more recent jumping stuff, finish editing and put music over it. Butttt is there anything else that you think I should add?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Hojq9_20x1c

Thanks xx

 

[lindsayH]

Gosh well done!!!

What's the purpose of the video exactly? I would end it on a close up of you smiling, maybe giving horse a hug or something. The video is very good but you can't see your face and a close up would remind them how gorgeous you are!

Best of luck!

 

[DottyConnection]

Haha but I most certainly don't look gorgeous on horseback! He's he beautiful one! x