Does anyone want to critique a horse advert for me?

[showjumper06]

As title, if anyone is at a loose end today and would be able to critique a horse advert for me I'd be SUPER grateful. I'm finding it hard to objectively criticise my horse's advert and would like opinions on whether the price is right (I'd be happy to let him go for peanuts to the right home but want to make sure I don't under price him and attract dealers, nutters and inexperienced riders).

No worries if everyone has better things to do with their time but if anyone feels very kind, let me know and I'll message you a link to the ad.

Thank you!

 

[twiggy2]

pm me the ad

 

[vam]

I'll take a look if you want

 

[Tonibird83]

I don't mind looking

 

[Flowersblossom123]

To be honest I think this a hard one, because no one here knows your horse. Good luck in finding him a home though.

 

[varkie]

If you want to pm me the ad, I'm happy to take a look. Ads are my (pt) living, so I'm used to seeing a lot!

 

[hnmisty]

Feel free to send it to me, I am very pedantic

 

[showjumper06]

Thanks everyone for the offers of help, this forum is amazing. Sorry for slow reply, I've not been near internet since yesterday. varkie and hnmisty I'll send you the ad - completely understand if you no longer have time to look though.

 

[Annagain]

I don't mind taking a look either. I've not done much buying or selling but I do write for a living and am always window shopping!