Drawing Critique please! (Again, I know :p)

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As title really, please could you critique this for me!

Thanks!
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Edit: Another poor quality picture, sorry! :D It's a picture of a picture if that makes sense
 
That is really good! Two things i would say are add some white to the eye to make it more realistic, and if you can do eyelashes in the white bit, to show the white part is a reflection *does that makes sense?* And theres a wiggly bit on the noseband where it dips in, is it supposed to be like that? If it is ignore me, but if not it would look better straighter.
But it's amazing at the moment (:
 
nelle48 said:
That is really good! Two things i would say are add some white to the eye to make it more realistic, and if you can do eyelashes in the white bit, to show the white part is a reflection *does that makes sense?* And theres a wiggly bit on the noseband where it dips in, is it supposed to be like that? If it is ignore me, but if not it would look better straighter.
But it's amazing at the moment (:
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Thanks! I will need to do some tweeking still. The wiggly bit is in the photo but less so looking at it (it's just one I found on google)
 
Ah ok. I was just checking cos i didn't want to not point it out, just incase it wasn't supposed to be like that (:
I'm going to carry on with my equine form sketchbook now. Oh the joys of Art GCSE :P
 
Oh, I hated GCSE, just finished. My teacher had no appreciation for something that was done simply because it looked nice. If it isn't poignant and meaningful it's no good according to her. She had me burying paper in a forest and sewing into chamois leather in the end. Odd. Very odd.

Good luck with yours though :D
 
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