pepperpots
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Oops, have just removed this, as I suspect it is classed as advertising.
Thanks for the advice.
Thanks for the advice.
Feedback on advert
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TGM
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Get some better photos! You need one good ridden flatwork photo to show her paces, and one good jumping photo - preferably over something like a spread with a filler.
donablue
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she looks sweet bless good luck in selling her ...
AmyMay
Situation normal
The second photo is awful.
Rather than saying excellent dressage/jumping prospect, why not say (if it's true) that she has nice flat work is like and jumps well. Say a little bit about what she's done etc.
Does look like a lovely pony.
Rather than saying excellent dressage/jumping prospect, why not say (if it's true) that she has nice flat work is like and jumps well. Say a little bit about what she's done etc.
Does look like a lovely pony.
QUICKFIRE
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Unfortunatly i dont think it has anything to do with your advert, I think it is more to do with economic climate at the moment. I know of several people with adverts running at the moment, and they are all saying the same, just not getting the calls, hope things pick up for you.