For Sale, help please!

[bexcy-bee]

Would any lovely lovely people please help me with my for sale video? I have made one, but want a different eye glanced over for me. I want brutally honest answers... What should I add in? Should I take anything out? Based on the video, what would you pay for him?

If you would be lovely enough to help me, I shall PM you the link, as I don't want to get told off for advertising.

Thank you all in advance [=

bexcy-bee x

 

[Meowy Catkin]

I'd be happy to look at your vid.

 

[Paddy Irish]

I'll have a look , pm me

 

[LaurenBay]

I will also have a look

 

[naza]

Is this of the little coloured dude? PM me and i'll look at it.
N x

 

[bexcy-bee]

Is this of the little coloured dude? PM me and i'll look at it.
N x

It is indeed! Have PMed you

Thank you to everyone, great help [=

bexcy-bee x

 

[Maddie2412]

me too please? x

 

[blackhorse37]

and me!

 

[bexcy-bee]

Ok, thank you to all you brillitant people who commented about the last video, the new and improved (hopefully!) one is available.

Have PMed those who said they would take another look, anyone else want to help?

thankyou [=

bexcy-bee x

 

[muddygreymare]

I'll have a look for you if you want?