Help proof reading...

I think it's really good - well done!

I am not sure how best to correct a few errors - not sure I can remember the order, but you don't need the apostrophe in horse's, or membership's, and I think there was one other (was there a make's perhaps?) but hopefully someone else will spot that one.

But you do need an apostrophe on the McTimoney page - the one saying manipulation of the horse's back, spine etc, as you are only referring to one horse by saying the horse, if you get my drift.

Best of all, you haven't littered the page with lots of these!!!!!! - my pet hate
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Just read the blog - another one - my horses and me, not I. The way to remember is to cut out the words my horses, so it would read get to know me.

Sorry - am I too pernickety?
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Agree with Wide_load: "... get to know my horses and me"
On the Sponsorship page: No apostrophe in horses, memberships or makes. Without is one word.
On the blog page; "...horses and snow, do not mix!" I'd remove the comma. "dangerous to turn out" (2 words)
There's a lower case I there as well.
Oh, under the sponsors heading on your blog; no apostrophe in logos.
You did ask
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