Help with 1 line of a advert. NOT advertising - promise.

Stormy123456

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Currently writing a advert and don't really know how to put this one line.

Said animal. Owner won't jump due to accident on other animal, so people that have been jumping green animal, have been racing it at jumps. Having aquired said animal to sell, don't know how to put we're schooling it now, taking it to PC rallies and starting xc, in the most compact way......

I tried to put that in as brief non advertisy way. Will delete asap if you think it is, although I doubt anyone is going to buy something from that description. :)
Any help much appreciated.
 
What about: 'Currently being schooled over fences, participating in PC Rallies and has just started Cross Country' That way you don't have to mention any of the bad bits.
 
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