Help with ad please .....

Ooh she is lovely, I'd like her if I was shopping! Think photos of jumping may help, otherwise have you tried other websites/mags?
 
Don't shout at me but she seems very expensive for what she is, she's not done a huge amount for 7yr old....as wellas the slight cribbing...also, pictures aren't great, looks like you've enlarged them and the quality has been reduced...get some better pics on there and lower the price I think...

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I think it's a nice add - but only really like the first photo. The second one isn't attractive at all.

I would also take out the bit about being ridden by a 30 year old and a 17 year old. I think that your hoping that she may go to a competative home of sorts - and maybe the advert doesn't put that across???
 
I think the ad is really good, very descriptive, just needs pics of her jumping.
Suprised she's not gone as seems a lovely sort, i'll keep my ears open for buyers as i'm in Berkshire too
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She hasn't done much affliated due to my work commitments but she has been out lots unaffliated up to and including elementary winning nearly everytime out and never unplaced at any level so she has done quite a bit, in the 3 times she has been out BD she has won, been 2nd and 3rd. She is more than ready to go out affliated BD elementary. She just hasn't been out and done too much jumping. She, however 99% (no horse is 100%) realiable and safe both hacking, in the school at home and at shows.
Anybody can ride her and get results- I let a teenager on the yard take her in an unaff dressage a few weeks ago at short notice, she got her ready, gave her 15 mins warm up and went in and won by a large %

Chestnutmonty- if you could that would be great!
 
I will be looking for another horse reasonably soon and she is really nice - I would be likely to go for her type, good dressage and ability to jump. I know this is not what you were asking but I was wondering if she ever rears/bucks/bolts/stops at jumps, I need to know what Iwill be letting myself in for if I go for one similar to her, because she does seem lovely, despite the cribbing. I'll be coming straight off a cob, and have only ever ridden warmbloods (about 30yo lol) at riding schools... I'd really appreciate it if you would get back to me
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