help with horse ad.

[pixy]

OMG I'm useless at this have been trying for ages to write a for sale ad. For my horse but I just can't seem to get it right. It doesn't flow at all and is all over the place and a bit long I think! Can anyone help?

 

[nix123]

I've pm'ed you x

 

[pixy]

I've pm'ed you x

thanks nix123 ive replied!

and please anyone else out there i have now written up a draft if anyone could look at it for me, i can pm you. it would be amazing thanks!

 

[L&M]

Hi Pixy - feel free to pm it to me as I am at loose end and love writing ads.

 

[nix123]

Have pmed you pixy