Help with this ad please?

[dwi]

I really need to sell my horsebox as I need the money and I've not had any luck so far with horsemart or ebay so I thought I'd try the pony club site.

Can you have a look at this ad and tell me if you think its okay? I don't understand why its not selling.

http://www.pcuk.org/index.php?option=com_adsmanager&page=show_ad&adid=23468&catid=3&Itemid=85

 

[monkeybum13]

How long has the advert been live?

I don't see anything wrong with the ad, just maybe people aren't buying in these "difficult financial times"

 

[dwi]

It's been advertised for nearly two months now, first on horsemart and then on ebay. I've only had two viewings both timewasters.

 

[nikki99]

cant see anything wrong with your ad at all! as monkeybum says maybe people just aren't buying atm.

 

[Spottyappy]

You seem to have worded it well, but although you state it carries up to a 15.1hh, it may help if you put the actual roof height in, so people can decide for themselves if it is ok for them or not? MAybe put the mileage of the box in too.
Sadly, as it is essentially a pony box, you are in a limited market, as the majority of folk want a box to carry at least one bigger horse.... Hang in there though, I am sure the right person will come along.

 

[Toby_Zaphod]

Having photos etc are ok but really people want to know the dimensions of the various areas. You have said that the payload is 1100kg which is fine but length, width & height of horse area is a must really. The buyers can then make up their own mind what size of horse/ponies etc can fit. Also you may as well give dimensions of the 'living' area.