how can i improve ?

[Gembo]

i really want to improve my riding so i was wondering if you could watch this video of the other week and give some suggestions as to how i could improve

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VrGoXNOxW7s

 

[Fuzznugget]

Hi, from the video it looks like you have a good position and good form over fences, but it's hard to say more without a more 'close up' view of you riding. Any chance the person doing the video could be in the ring or maybe zoom in on you more?

 

[Gembo]

heres another video but im afraid its only flatwork ....havent got a close up jumping video

 

[Gembo]

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FH3b0Nyt-7U&feature=related

 

[Gembo]

Just wanting some tips on my position and how i could improve im not sure if you can tell or not but he's very strong and i sometimes have trouble stopping him and keeping a good rhythm and tips and advice would be muchly appreciated