How does this read.....? And a sneaky how much

[Legs11]

I am terrible with advert wording so how does this read?
Please CC away!!!!

Two Palomino colts both out of well bred registered NTR mares (both dams can be seen) by Premium Graded Stallion Vangelis.
Both colts hold Palomino Society passports.
Well handled, good with farrier, seen traffic & farm machinery.
Will both make 16.2hh+
Competition futures.
Will geld if required.

 

[Kat]

how old?

 

[Legs11]

Ah.... sorry ad is to go on horsemart so age comes up in another box.....They are both two.

 

[R2R]

You need to put the most important things first

Competition prospects, to make 16.2hh. (this is your headline)
Two Palomino colts, (insert ages) reg. with Palomino society. By Premium Graded Stallion Vangelis, out of out of well bred registered NTR mares
Well handled, good with farrier, seen traffic & farm machinery.
Will geld if required.

 

[millyspaniel]

They sound lovely!!!
am tempted!!

 

[Legs11]

millyspaniel - Please be tempted!

I am selling them on behalf of the owner - I rent my yard from her.
She is elderly, disabled and desperate for them to go to a decent home!!