Never had to advertise before... is this OK?

[Nicki85]

I've pretty much taken over Jess on full loan now due to owner's ill health. I'm advertising for a sharer so we can keep her fitness up, help with costs and generally help look after her.

She has no quirks and can be ridden by anyone... just a lovely horse really!

So here is the advert, is it OK? Pic is not great, what do you think?

http://www.preloved.co.uk/fuseaction-adverts.showadvert/index-1032224599/ed68f635.html

 

[chaps89]

You don't mention if she could be hacked out on her own, if she jumps, or could be competed? But otherwise she sounds lovely

 

[Nicki85]

good point... she does everything really! She is brill to hack on her own + they could also have lessons (either get someone in or hack to nearby livery yard) she hasn't competed in a year but def. an option in the new year.

I'll put that in

thanks