New Advert for Digby - What do you think have i missed anything?

[trefnantblackknight]

http://www.preloved.co.uk/adverts/show/105267257/ridersharer-wanted-for-cheeky-132hh-pony.html

Tried to make it short but imformative - what do you think?

 

[asommerville]

At least your honest

 

[be positive]

I know he is not for sale but his age could still be relevant, it may be good to put it clearly that they can take him out to PC/comps etc and whether you have transport to do so.
Is he good in traffic, that would be my priority if a child was riding.

 

[trefnantblackknight]

I know he is not for sale but his age could still be relevant, it may be good to put it clearly that they can take him out to PC/comps etc and whether you have transport to do so.
Is he good in traffic, that would be my priority if a child was riding.

Will pop that in - we are getting a trailer end of sept but i normally get lifts and they could come with me until them but i'll tell them tht if/when they ring

Thank you

 

[meandmyself]

No timewaster - if you arrange to come and try him i will give you directions to the local riding school and if you ring me i will direct you the rest of the way as i have had too many timewasters to count.

I can understand why you're added it, but this makes you sound like you'd be hard to get along with.

 

[trefnantblackknight]

I can understand why you're added it, but this makes you sound like you'd be hard to get along with.

Hmmm should i take that out then and just tell them on the phone

 

[trefnantblackknight]

http://www.preloved.co.uk/adverts/show/105267257/ridersharer-wanted-for-cheeky-132hh-pony.html

changed it again - added bits and taken out the grumpy part

 

[cobmum]

He is the cutest thing I like the ad and pictures honest and informative!

 

[millikins]

Do you have a photo of him doing something? If he's suitable for a child to take jumping, then a picture might attract more suitable loaners.

 

[ameeyal]

I would put a better picture of him being ridden/jumped.

 

[trefnantblackknight]

I would put a better picture of him being ridden/jumped.

I will 'try' and be brave and jump him in the week