Please help with my dissertation!

[JJB88]

Hello,

Im a third year student of BSc Animal Behaviour and a dog trainer. I am doing my dissertation of which the title of the study is ‘The Publics Understanding of Canine Behaviour’. The aim is to determine if there is an association between the understanding of canine behaviour and behavioural issues. This would help us know if a better education could improve welfare and reduce the number of dogs rehomed or destroyed and also help reduce the number of people bitten.


If you are a British dog owner, over 18 I’d be extremely grateful if you could take a few minutes to complete a short questionnaire about you and your dog. An info pack will be available providing an insight to the most recent canine behaviour research and training methods.


PLEASE NOTE if you are a dog trainer or behaviourist you cannot take part in this study as your qualifications and experience means you do not represent the general public.


If you wish to take part in this survey please click the link below which will take you directly to the questionnaire.


Thank you for your time

https://www.surveymonkey.com/s/WDGDLYR

 

[Carsmore]

done

 

[Bossdog]

done, nice survey BTW, very comprehensive but easy to complete, well done!

 

[vicky86]

done

 

[kerilli]

happy to do this, but the spelling and grammatical errors really grate since it is for a Dissertation!
"effect" should be "affect", apostrophes and commas needed in quite a few places, "mean" not "means" (plural subject),"you're 18" instead of "you 18", "ensures" for "ensure" (singular subject) etc etc.
sorry to be pedantic but since it is something so academic i feel it should be error-free!

 

[Gooby]

I would post this also in all about dogs!

 

[Tinkerbee]

Done

 

[camilla4]

Done

 

[mtj]

done

 

[dianeholmes]

Done good luck - I was completing a dissertation this time last year so know what you are going through!

 

[RobinHood]

done

 

[LMuirEDT]

Done

 

[FanyDuChamp]

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happy to do this, but the spelling and grammatical errors really grate since it is for a Dissertation!
"effect" should be "affect", apostrophes and commas needed in quite a few places, "mean" not "means" (plural subject),"you're 18" instead of "you 18", "ensures" for "ensure" (singular subject) etc etc.
sorry to be pedantic but since it is something so academic i feel it should be error-free!

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Personally I agree. I also start sentences with a capital letter and use a capital I to refer to myself.

 

[Dubsie]

My only 'problem' was the question about sleep - ours is an old dog and I couldn't decide as he clearly likes about 16-18 hours, but answered for an average aged dog