What do you think...............

[Halfpass]

..this is the advert that i have placed in horsemart. What do you think?
http://www.horsemart.co.uk/AdvertRef/HM626DGED/ID//Web/DisplayHorseDetail.asp
Have also put it in h+h but its not the same ad and i don't really like it. Wrote it quickly last night after a little bit of wine and now wish it was different do you think they will let me change the wording.

 

[Tempi]

no offence, but the first picture is awful, id take it off!! i hope you only put the jumping one in H&H. The wording of the add is fine tho xx

 

[AmyMay]

I'd look at him. He seems like a really nice sort.

Good luck.

 

[spaniel]

I prefer to see a 'stood up' photo as well as a jumping one.

In fact yours is the sort that I would look twice at, what a nice chap!

 

[Rachel_M]

He looks like he has a good pop.

I agree, you would get people having a closer look.


Good luck.

 

[Tempi]

just re-read what i wrote, i wasnt meaning it in a nsaty way - it just the camera angle does him no justice and hes a nice looking horse, which is shown in the bottom picture of him jumping xx

 

[henryhorn]

perhaps a better side on pic? wording is fine, and you can change anything you want whilst the ad is live, just follow the instructions.

 

[horsegirl]

HI,

I've just read your previous email about deciding to sell him as he refuses jumps, gets sent out the arena in dressage, behaves differently from one day to the next and only really wants to hunt but you have advertised him as an allrounder saying he has done dressage, xc and sj. Surely that's a little misleading?

 

[Halfpass]

Maybe that post didn't make it clear. I don't think he will take me to the level i want to be at as i do not have the confidence to give him the confidence that he needs to do it if that makes sense. He needs a firm and very forward thinking rider and then i am sure he will pop a nice fence on a more regular basis. He obviously won't affiliate but i haven't said he will. He would make someone a nice all rounder that only wants to potter to the odd show but would also make a serious hunter so i don't feel the post is missleading at all. And also bear in mind that when i wrote that post i had just decided to sell my horse and was feeling very fragile and in hindsight probably should have waited a day before annoincing it on the forum and maybe i wouldn't have been so harsh on the poor chap. He'll make someone a fab horse just not me. Thanks for the advice anyway