Writing an advert

[piaffe]

If I were to put the vital stats ect on here of a horse, would someone be willing to help me write an advert/ word it etc? I've only ever sold horses via word of mouth so doing an actual advert is a little daunting!

I want to get it right.

 

[Christmas_Kate]

who are you selling?

 

[ThomasTank]

I would love to help but you probably wouldnt get a single phone call if I helped

 

[Weezy]

I will gladly help

 

[bendino]

I will help you! it well help me with my english revision for my gcse! I like helping...

 

[Happy Bird]

I have found that looking at other adverts help and telling the truth (not implying that you wouldn't) Keep it brief and find a really good action pic. Nothing worse than a pic of a horse grazing and I don't like pics of free schooling as they don't give a true pic of how the horse goes.

 

[piaffe]

OK, great all. just a quick reply. Im off to watch Dr Who and then Ill be back to post the details. may even link my photo bucket account so someone can choose a pic!

xxxxxxx

 

[piaffe]

Ok here goes-

13./2hh
Grey
Mare
Unknown breeding.
Excellent to shoe, load, lorry and trailer, clip etc
Lives in or out, however, mostly out.
5 years.
Good in traffic
Hacks on her own and with others very happily

Has only jumped a little bit at home but has done some clear round with my 16 year old sister and my 5 year old (lead rein). Is very very honest. Taught my children to ride.

Competed regularly (well, not for a while) in dressage (unaff prelim and novice). Placed nearly every time out with inexperienced rider. Started lateral work.

Erm……anything else?

Also, any idea of what I should ask?