ad help!!!!

[LadyRascasse]

help!!!! i have attempted to write an ad to advertise my boy for share, here is what i have written but it doesn't sound right to me

17yrs old 16.1 TB gelding availble for share, ideal horse for someone who want to have a little fun, excellent to hack out alone or in company. lovely paces and very easy to do has been ridden and jumped by a small 12year old no problems. not a novice ride due to the fact he can read his rider and
knows when he can take the mick (never nasty but trys to see how little work he can get away with) days and price neogatiable.

 

[My_chestnut_mare]

maybe you could start off with "share available 17 year blah blah bla"

i think the ad is fine myself.

 

[spookypony]

How about:

17yrs old 16.1 TB gelding availble for share. Ideal horse for someone who want to have a little fun. Excellent to hack out alone or in company. Lovely paces and very easy to do. Has been ridden and jumped by a small 12year old no problems. No novices please. Days and price negotiable.

Maybe something about his level of schooling? Height he will jump?

 

[LadyRascasse]

at the moment we don't know how big he will be able to jumo he used to jump 4ft no probs but he has had feet problems (sorted now) so we are going to start jumping him soon and see how he copes. there would also be a chance to do local riding club activitys to the right person. schooling wise he doesn't do flashy dressage moves but is lovely to ride, he is the middle and end photo in my sig.