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Ok, so I am hopeless at these. After much thought, we have decided now is the time to find a new home for Tilly. How's this:

Approx 14.1 coloured middleweight mare, age 4. Skewbald with two blue eyes. Unbacked, but very well handled. Easy to catch, good to have feet trimmed, vaccinated, microchipped. Lives in or out, extremely good doer, excellent with other horses. Very good temperament. Now needs to go and do something as totally bored and wasted. She is homebred and was handreared, so excellent kind home with other horses wanted - no dealers or novices.

Have no idea on price.
 
Thanks for your reply. She is totally genuine, but sadly not as big as her mum was (she was 15.2 and a HW), so Tilly is not big enough for me and is too good to be a glorified pet.
 
Has she been to any shows? Been lunged/ long reined or anything? Has she ever travelled? How is she bred?
 
Advert looks great, but im not sure the approx is good as a first word, just seems abit strange.

And as for price, how heavy is she? I know you say MW, but how heavy is that for you?
 
Good point about the "Approx" - will take that out. She isn't a HW - but could probably take 12 stone, so she is a chunky MW. She hasn't been out and about to any shows. She is out of a traditional gypsy cob mare - have no idea about the father as the mare was in foal when we bought her (which we didn't know!).
 
Personally, I'd take the 'bored' part out - not the greatest image to project. To say he is wasted in his present home is plenty IMO.
 
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