Advert for livery yard ( what do you think)

[Holly27]

At last hubby has helped me to get my advert of the vista print site !!so i can show you all ,
this is what Ive had printed ,so i can put in tack shops etc and hand out to my friends who are ridding instructors
i have put an ad in ad trader for 8 wks to start with what do u think ?
god I'm nervous now all this hard work for the last 5 months and now we are opening ......
i know it will be slow im not expecting a rush of people . my advert click here

 

[Morrigan_Lady]

Its blocked here saying it contains Pornography!! What sort of livery services are you advertising!!!

 

[peanut]

Looks good. If I was looking for livery in your area, I would want to ring up and find out more.

 

[Llwyncwn]

It looks fabulous. You have kept the information to a minimum which is good as people will always have a list of questions for you when they ring.

I wish you all the very best of luck

 

[moodymare1987]

Oh that looks lovely shame you not near me I would come with mine

 

[Shilasdair]

* Shilasdair points at advert, scowling *

Admin! Admin! Sneaky adverts, Admin!
ADMIN!

S

 

[Holly27]

whoops my hubby is hosting it on his server from his adult site he owns
you dont see anything but my advert but its on the same server
te he quite funny really te he cant wait to tell him it said that he he lol

 

[mrdarcy]

Sounds fab. I'd definitely be ringing you up if I was in your area as it's just what I'm looking for in a livery yard. Good luck!

And your hubby sounds like a very interesting bloke!

 

[Holly27]

ok i wont except anyone from on here te he just comments
he he
dont want to get into trouble

 

[u04elw2]

Looks great

Yeah better be careful, I had a post removed for asking peoples opinions on my new business. Think it lasted about 2 days lol.

I think they should have a special section on the forum so you can advertise. I'm sure nobody would mind paying a little for the privelige either

 

[Nats_uk]

Looks good but what is standard livery?

 

[trundle]

It looks good to me. My aunt used to live not that far from Burgh St Peter (at Toft Monks).

 

[Holly27]

yep thats just up the road from me its very pretty round here


standard livery - im going to offer 5 days full livery and weekend diy

full livery- 7 days full livery everything included

i dont want part liverys and diy
so im doing this if that makes sence

 

[Holly27]

thanks guys for all the comments xx

 

[Cop-Pop]

Looks v posh

Will u be hosting competitions or anything?

 

[mickey]

Looks great.

If you have a website I'd stick the address on there.
I wondered if you have post & rail/electric fencing you might add this
Do you offer individual turnout?
Also what is Standard livery? If this is part livery I'd change the wording to that as most people know what that is.

 

[ISHmad]

What a lovely part of the country to be in. And a great sounding yard too, especially with all that land and all year turnout available. I think you will soon be inundated with takers!

 

[merlinsquest]

Agree with the things said about standard livery, sounds a bit amaturish as not a normal discription.

Other than that though it looks lovely