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I am aware I have to be very carefull here, in reguards to advertising boundries etc

But I am selling a horse that is quite a specific / quirky ride.

I have tried to write an advert that openly describes this, and I just wondered if anyone may be able to have a look at it for me, and tell me how it comes across from an outside point of view

I know often with adverts people read between the lines, and I dont want to portray the horse as a nut case, because it really isnt, and the right person will have no end of fun with him, but at the same time If one more person asks if he is suitable for their 12 year old child, I am going to loose the will to live :o
 
Many Thanks, I have messaged you B.P

I put him on the project horses site a while back, and got little interest. The ones that were interested wanted to pay very little money (under 1000) or loan. I am currently out jumping bsja on the horse, hunter trialed him several times last year going clear every time, and he is sound vice free, and a gent on the ground. Just a very exciteable and specific ride, so I thought he was worth more than that. Guess I could try again now its spring though :) x
 
I have replied by pm but just looked at the suggestions here, he is not a project horse you need to target a better market, he is what he is and not going to change, sell him as more of a proven schoolmaster for a gutsy rider that wants to go out and compete bringing home ribbons, go on the smarter sites, yes they cost but you do get people looking that expect to pay for the horse:rolleyes:
 
I have replied by pm but just looked at the suggestions here, he is not a project horse you need to target a better market, he is what he is and not going to change, sell him as more of a proven schoolmaster for a gutsy rider that wants to go out and compete bringing home ribbons, go on the smarter sites, yes they cost but you do get people looking that expect to pay for the horse:rolleyes:
 
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