Advert wording help..

nikki_07766

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I’m just padding out an advert for my lorry, does this sounds ok?, what would you like to read to make you call?, any help would be much appreciated:

Coach built Renault Master 3.5ton Horsebox (2.31 ton unladen). L reg, 2.5 liter. Diesel. 108,000 miles. Taxed until end Oct 08, Mot until Aug 09. Carries 2 large horses. Measurements: height 7'3", width from back to breast bar 6'6". Rear facing, very low ramp helping the most nervous of horses to load, there is a grooms area in the back with some seating, saddle, bridle racks and lots of hooks, Window from cab to horse area, two windows in the horse area and a roof vent making it very light and airy, CCTV, Cd player, Very tidy condition for year. Only for sale as upgrading. For more details call.
 
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