Advice on wording something please

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sarah23

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Please before anybody says I'm advertising I'm not, i just need some help

I'm just trying to word an advert for someone else. I want to say they are available to teach people and also available to ride horses for flat work, showjumping and XC training, but i just can't think how i can word it to make it sound professional. My way just sound cr@p.
 
Essential points of marketing - who is your market/ tsrget audience - ie what is the offer? Some clues might be needed to make an informed judgement.
 
He can teach from a beginner right up to the more advance rider. He has worked, ridden and trained with Mark Todd for over 10 yrs and also Emile Faurie, both on a high level so more than skilled to school horses.

I have put his teaching skills, just can't think how to word it that he can ride and school any horses as well.
 
"Capable and experienced in riding and schooling from grassroots to the highest level in several disciplines"??

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I'm making up some flyer's to give out when i go to a local show next weekend. He is charging £25 for a lesson, should i put this on the flyer or leave it of and put ring for prices.
 
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"Capable and experienced in riding and schooling from grassroots to the highest level in several disciplines"??

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ace!

defo put the price on... i never ever dare ring places unless the price is clear, as i'm always too embarrassed to say 'how much?!?!'

and £25 seems a very good price so he should be advertising it! oooh, he might be getting a call from me when i've popped!

xxx
 
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