BroadfordQueen
Well-Known Member
I am taking the plunge (well, about to!) and am writing a letter to my sister-in-laws dad to ask for sponsorship. I know that I need to include the benifits for his company in the letter, and why i want the sponsorship, but i dont know exactly what to include.
I was thinking of telling him that his company would get a mention over the loudspeaker when i enter the ring (ie. "and this is Sophie riding Lady Tara, sponsered by..."). I would also mention the fact that i would get his company name templated onto my trailer and embroidered into a jacket.
In return i would ask for his company to cover my entry fees.
Do you think i should mention the fact that i am heading off to the amateur championships in a few weeks, which will have lots of spectators?
And also do you think I should mention that he shouldn't feel pressured to say yes just because he is my brothers father-in-law (but worded better than that!)?
I'm abit hopeless when it comes to stuff like this, it will be proof read by my dad before being sent for grammar/spelling corrections.
Please can i have any tips? Do i need to include anything else?
I was thinking of telling him that his company would get a mention over the loudspeaker when i enter the ring (ie. "and this is Sophie riding Lady Tara, sponsered by..."). I would also mention the fact that i would get his company name templated onto my trailer and embroidered into a jacket.
In return i would ask for his company to cover my entry fees.
Do you think i should mention the fact that i am heading off to the amateur championships in a few weeks, which will have lots of spectators?
And also do you think I should mention that he shouldn't feel pressured to say yes just because he is my brothers father-in-law (but worded better than that!)?
I'm abit hopeless when it comes to stuff like this, it will be proof read by my dad before being sent for grammar/spelling corrections.
Please can i have any tips? Do i need to include anything else?