Constructive criticism needed please - my website

[Ashf]

Well, I've come to the conclusion that apart from what I do with the stencils, I thought it would be common sense to add a section to my website for 'newbies to clipping' so they have a better understanding of why people clip their horses.

I've cherry picked a fair bit of info from the interweb (as you do), but I need for some other eyes take a look at it and let me know if I've made any typos or just got it plain wrong

Anyway its here > Clipping styles

Thanks in advance

 

[Weezy]

Looks good to me - LOVE the cartoon man LOL!

 

[Ashf]

Well, thats one vote lol.

Oh, more importantly, have I missed any important points?

 

[TigerLilly]

love the site very good

 

[Prudence]

What about a bib clip?

Also, most often the whole head is removed in a chaser clip.

 

[Ashf]

I've made reference to the bib clip in the Belly and neck clip paragraph which is the 1st one on the list.

Do you think it needs a bit more elaboration on this ?

Ash runs off to find another source for the Chaser clip info

 

[Weezy]

No I cant see any info missing at all - it reads very well

 

[Patchwork]

Just from scanning it I think it reads well but in the first section title and first paragraph you need an apostrophe in 'horses' and there are a few random capitalised words in the middle of sentences.

 

[brighteyes]

Excellent job - love the cartoon!

 

[Frazer]

Very good, When I clip my mare in the winter, I will defentinly be buying a stencil!! Has anyone had an experinces with clipping with stencils. Does your usual clipper do these, or do you have to do these yourself.

 

[Ashf]

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Very good, When I clip my mare in the winter, I will defentinly be buying a stencil!! Has anyone had an experinces with clipping with stencils. Does your usual clipper do these, or do you have to do these yourself.

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I do

What do you need to know ?

When you say 'clipper' do you mean the 'clippers' which go in your hand, or the 'clipper' you pay to come and do your horse ?

 

[Claireg9]

very good, at the bottom in the notice bit though you do not take any responsibly... think its supposed to be responsibility.
Other than that great.

 

[Ashf]

Oh, ta, I'll adjust it when I get home. Its just standard disclaimer stuff like in McDonalds if you buy a cup of coffee, they have warnings on the labels saying it may burn you if you drop it in your lap LOL