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Can you clever people check it for me please? I'm not advertising, just a genuine help please! It's for the PC website...

8 year old Connemara X, chestnut gelding.

Incredible showjumping pony :
has qualified for the British Novice second rounds for 2009 in 4 shows, also has discovery double clears. Seriously consistent record - has won every time out. Won 2 of his BN's, second in the other 2, has also won a Discovery. Has competed up to 1.05m, but scope to go much higher. 157 ACT 61 NOT in only 5 outings. Phenomenal against the clock - often wins by 2 or 3 seconds. Qualified Dengie Area finals 2008 & 2009, placed 2008. Qualified Trailblazers Championships 2008, where he won his class. Done PC teams. Jumping 1.15m at home with ease.

Completed 3 BE Intros last season, clears SJ & XC. Has schooled up to Novice, bold & keen, ready for PN this season. Nothing fazes him XC - ditches, water, trakehners. Definate FEI/JRN potential.

Only for sale as rider onto horses. Sad sale of much loved pony. Videos & other photos available.


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You need to add his height
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Fab advert, maybe add something about flatwork though? Add if he does changes (I only mention that as hes a SJ ponio!)
Is he safe to hack/clip/shoe/load etc?
Does he hack and travel alone?
Snaffle mouthed? (if not, don't mention)
Ditto with martingale
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It doesnt read very easliy. How about-

148cm 8yrs part-bred connemara gelding.
This super pony BE evented last season at intro level and has more recently been affiliated to the BSJA with a great tally of wins from just 5 shows. So far he has winnings of 157 ACT. 61 NOT. and has won at BN and discovery. Qualified BN 2nd rounds 2009.
Has real potential as he is scopey, careful and very fast against the clock combined with nice paces and a great attitude xc.
Hacks alone/ in company, 100% traffic, box, clip, shoe etc. No vices

Could do any job but is a serious propect for a competitive jockey.

Sad sale of much loved pony as rider is on to horses.
 
I would be inclined to say the water one as then people know he jumps into water (people always seem to ask that) but on the other hand he does look a tad wild lol
 
It sounds good nothing about pc rallies or camp, clipping, loading etc. though. Can you add the link to videos on you tube? - i think i've seen that done before on the pc website.

Hes lovely btw
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Whoops sorry have just looked on the pc website and you have most of the above in!
 
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