Does anyone mind checking this ad?

Parkranger

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Hi,

Just wondered if I could have a bit of feedback on the ad for my boy:

Super, lightweight ISH, 15.3. Great out hacking - alone or in company. Honest horse, very good in the stable and impeccable at shows and has competed unaff showing/dressage classes. Has done a small amount of jumping at home but this is not his strong point due to non deteritorating blindness in one eye that does not effect him when ridden on the flat. Easy to do in all respects: loads, travels, catch and is not phased by hacking on roads etc. Very fun to ride out. Has been diagnosed with a mild hock spavin which, in time, should heal itself. Would prefer him to go to a hacking home but there may be the option of competing in dressage in the future. Looking for someone to loan with the view to purchase at a later date. All homes will be vetted. Forward going, sensible ride.
 
Ad is fine, well written, although I think it should be fazed and not phased.
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Good luck in finding him a suitable new home.
 
You haven't put his age, colour and sex! The bit about hacking on the roads sounds a bit vague - if he is good in traffic then state it explicitly.
 
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Hmm... is this a sneaky way of free advertising I wonder....?

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Oh give it a rest and dont be so boring!

Parkranger, think the ad is fine! Just the age you have not put in!
 
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