following on from help please post!

weesophz

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so after taking on everyones advice i re wrote my ads for a sharer for fox. It reads as follows:

"Lovely 15.2 TB gelding for part share.

Sharing would involve caring for Fox 2-3 days per week on a friendly DIY livery yard. Yard has floodlit school for night time riding and good hacking.

He would be perfect for someone perhaps coming back to horses after a break, or for someone who would like their own horse but just doesn’t have the time to care for one full time. Could also be nice for a mother/child share as he has been ridden in the school by total novices on and off of lead rein. Works nicely in the school and will pop a fence if asked. Hacks alone and in company, and is 100% in traffic, doesn’t bat an eyelid at buses, motorbikes etc. Can be nappy but will ride on with a rider confident enough to get him going. Well mannered boy, and easy to do, very laid back.

He must stay at current yard. Yard is located in Jackton, between Hairmyers and Eaglesham just outside of East Kilbride.

If contacting by phone please call after 4pm."

also added a picture of him popping a fence and walking through a river on a hack.

still think somethings missing but im not very good at this.. at least its better than it was!

please let me know what you guys think, and thanks again!
 
Sounds like a good ad :)

Finding sharers is hard right now. I gave up after the ones that contacted me back werent suitable so my bys getting a holiday and ill bring him back into work in the spring myself :)
 
Sounds like a good ad :)

Finding sharers is hard right now. I gave up after the ones that contacted me back werent suitable so my bys getting a holiday and ill bring him back into work in the spring myself :)

thanks!

oh no :( i wish i had that option, because i have so much stuff to do for uni, and i have to work, AND my sharer cant do any extra days i really need someone, im proper exhausted, had to take a day off of uni today!
 
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