So what do you think? CONSTRUCTIVE criticism please 
I guess i have bad habits It's basically supposed to show that i'm able to ride. The alternatives to the jumping bits are: ride with contact, ride in a double bridle and show some lateral movements, so you don't have to be extremely good or anything. The video is marked out of 10. Are the first 3mins now a requirement? (spec may have changed from when i marked videos last year)
Not sure if you have included sound but when i played it there wasn't any. Would be useful for you to explain what you're doing and why in the opening 3 mins if this section is a requirement as often it will be a non horsey PE teacher looking at the video. (this is why I was involved in the marking at my school) It would help them understand what you're doing and would demonstrate your knowledge. Ridden work is good, but could you not do you flat work as more of a mini dressage test demonstrating circles and figures of 8, nothing too complicated but shows control, steering and clear transitions. Jumping is impressive and nothing i can think to improve there...
The tacking up bit was actualy take 3 as horse is a bit grumpy when being tacked up so in take 1 she nearly kicked me and kicked out at friend and in take 2 she tried to grab the camera with her teeth (yes she's had all the possible checks, she's a grumpy mare that all it is) Thank you for taking the time to watch it and for the comments!
good luck sure it will go well
but some of the comments above are not entirely correct, so I'll just stick my tuppence worth in 
The door, one of my many bad habits, i'm just so used to the horse puttting her nose in the headcollar and walking straight out with me, saves time in the morning when trying to do everything on time! And thank you I'm not going to list my credentials - if you want to know them you can pm me
You do need to move the horse back and close the door behind you before putting on the headcollar.
You should be wearing a hat and gloves to lead the horse out of the stable. You do not need to wear hat and gloves when you are carrying out tasks in the stable.
Your knot is perfectly okay, providing you always put the free end through the last loop (otherwise the horse can undo himself). In many ways I prefer this knot to other "quick release" knots because the rope comes free instantly from the string rather than having to be passed through it - so it is actually a quicker release.
Don't go round the back of the horse, go round the front. At this level you should probably unclip the lead rope and go in front of the horse, holding onto the headcollar as you do so, then reclip it.
The horse is "girthy" and reacts when you put on the saddle, so I would position yourself nearer his shoulder than his hind legs! Always check both sides of your saddle and bridle. You're tacking up from the left but you must go to the other side and make sure everything is okay there as well.
Having the headcollar round the neck and the rope untied through the string is fine - do not (as suggested above somewhere) have the headcollar round the neck and the rope tied.
I don't care if you do the noseband or throatlash up first, but usually you would do the noseband to ensure that it isn't poking the horse in the eye while you're doing other things! I agree that it would look better if you showed that you are checking the fitting of the bridle - personally I think the cavesson part of your noseband is sitting too low anyway.
Mounting - I would actually prefer to see you mounting from a block (better for horse/saddle/you!) but mounting from the ground is okay. However, you need your reins shorter so you are in control of the horse, and your left hand
should be at the base of the neck just forward of the withers, NOT on the pommel. Try standing at his shoulder and facing the tail more, using your right hand to turn the stirrup towards you, and then putting your left foot in the stirrup, your right hand on the waist of the saddle on the far side - if you can reach!! - and NOT on the cantle. The swing yourself up and your right leg over and sit gently in the saddle. If your reins are the right length he won't walk forward when you get on. If you need to haul on the saddle to get on, or if you can't reach over to the waist of the saddle on the far side, you definitely should be using a block.
That's as far as I got with your video, you'll be glad to know!
I asked my PE teacher and i have been told to show mounting from the ground unfortunately, otherwise i always mount from a block Horse always walks off straight away, i had to film this part after i rode her because she trots off if i mount before she's slightly tired, and if my reins are short she rears then trots off, i have been working on this and this is a big improvement so unfortunately this is also the horse so, i'm hoping what i have done wrong won't put my mark down. But we shall see Thank you for comments again and thanks for watching it 
I'm not going to list my credentials - if you want to know them you can pm me
You do need to move the horse back and close the door behind you before putting on the headcollar.
You should be wearing a hat and gloves to lead the horse out of the stable. You do not need to wear hat and gloves when you are carrying out tasks in the stable.
Your knot is perfectly okay, providing you always put the free end through the last loop (otherwise the horse can undo himself). In many ways I prefer this knot to other "quick release" knots because the rope comes free instantly from the string rather than having to be passed through it - so it is actually a quicker release.
Don't go round the back of the horse, go round the front. At this level you should probably unclip the lead rope and go in front of the horse, holding onto the headcollar as you do so, then reclip it.
The horse is "girthy" and reacts when you put on the saddle, so I would position yourself nearer his shoulder than his hind legs! Always check both sides of your saddle and bridle. You're tacking up from the left but you must go to the other side and make sure everything is okay there as well.
Having the headcollar round the neck and the rope untied through the string is fine - do not (as suggested above somewhere) have the headcollar round the neck and the rope tied.
I don't care if you do the noseband or throatlash up first, but usually you would do the noseband to ensure that it isn't poking the horse in the eye while you're doing other things! I agree that it would look better if you showed that you are checking the fitting of the bridle - personally I think the cavesson part of your noseband is sitting too low anyway.
Mounting - I would actually prefer to see you mounting from a block (better for horse/saddle/you!) but mounting from the ground is okay. However, you need your reins shorter so you are in control of the horse, and your left hand
should be at the base of the neck just forward of the withers, NOT on the pommel. Try standing at his shoulder and facing the tail more, using your right hand to turn the stirrup towards you, and then putting your left foot in the stirrup, your right hand on the waist of the saddle on the far side - if you can reach!! - and NOT on the cantle. The swing yourself up and your right leg over and sit gently in the saddle. If your reins are the right length he won't walk forward when you get on. If you need to haul on the saddle to get on, or if you can't reach over to the waist of the saddle on the far side, you definitely should be using a block.
That's as far as I got with your video, you'll be glad to know!
In the ideal world, i should have a schoolmaster type that will be fine whatever i do, but i have a quirky horse that has learnt my bad habits and previous owners and is used to certain ways of doing things, when something is done differently it throws a strop and has a paddy about it
you are lucky that the person marking as horse knowledge, otherwise they would be reading up the correct way so you would have to do the bhs way.
im just pausing the video and putting down things that stand out to me. I taught equine student the bhs way of doing things and have had to do video evidence like this may time
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-close the door behind you - put the rope over the horses neck - hat and gloves
- i wouldnt go behind the horse (you know shes fine, the examiner doesnt)
- check your throat lash and nose band with fingers
- check your girth and stirrups before mounting.
-i personally wouldnt hold onto the front of the saddle when mounting
- the riding looks great! just watch your lower leg and shoulders ( im sure they wont be that mean to pick up on it!)
you are a very tidy and quiet rider! well done
I know i'm not supposed to go behind her, as i have previously said thou, she's used to different things and i also know that this may bring my marks down. If i go in front of her she'll bit me, simples. She has been previously owned by a girl who sold her pony to buy a big impressive horse, but didn't think that the horse may need bigger rugs, so every time she put the rugs on she had to yank them forwrds to do them up, now imagine how much that hurt the poor thing when it was fully clipped in winter, so in defence she started biteing hece girl got scared and sold it. Now despite having nicely fitting rugs etc she still remembers the pain and is very touch with her front, means she can and will bite if i annoy her by brushing against her front all the time, so its just easier to go round the back really, but i do know the correct way thank you for the comments and for the compliments 
Your horse looks like a brilliant jumper! And the vid made me want to go round aylesford again, such a brilliant schooling venue! i tend to ride bareback or with saddle and stirrups, haven't ridden without stirrups for years so it was a bit weird but when i asked my teacher if instead of without stirrups i can do bareback she said no as it's considered not safe so i wouldn't get any marks for it I have put it onto a disc and am going to take it in to school for the teacher to look at and tell me if anything needs changing before handing it in properly Thanks everyone for your comments! Much appriciated Some people have been quite harsh and picky here! It's mainly about showing that you can do the sport up to a certain level I think isn't it? So you have done that really well