H&H ad done, hows it look?

Good ad but in the first paragraph you say twice she can't be ridden in open spaces without being a loon (ad readers translation there) I would change that. Lovely pony!
 
I would put the price up a bit as I think she is so cheap that people will automatically think 'what's wrong with her?'
 
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