HELP ME WITH THIS ADVERT!

[Forget_Me_Not]

So not really sure what or how to write an advert for Rambo. So far...

PART LOAN/SHARE/RIDER

My name is Rambo. I am a chestnut sheltand with flaxen mane and tail. I like childern who groom, ride and make a fuss of me. At them moment I get groomed and ridden on the leadrein around the field or lanes every Saturday by a three year old. I have been riden off the leadrein too.

01903 884955
West Sussex, Halnaker.

and what photos...

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B)

C)

D)

 

[Irishcobs]

I wouldn't put your number on here.
I think the last pic is the best as it shows how good he is.
Say what you are looking for. Do you want someone to ride him everyday or twice a week. Do they need to do stable work to? Are they to pay you and how much etc.

 

[rara007]

1st and last picture!

 

[soph21]

The pic him in the field with his fleece on and the last 1, he's adorable!!!
He wont be advertised for long!

Sophie xxx

 

[Shilasdair]

Last picture, and him in the field.
Edit and remove your number - some of these forummers (especially JM07) are very odd, you know.
S

 

[GinaB]

Edit and remove your no please...don't want Shilasdair keeping it

And just correct the spelling, should be grand. I always think it's quite cute to write ads as if the pony has written it. (Ponys aimed at kids, not horses for adults though!)

 

[katie_and_toto]

I'd use the 1st and last pictures

 

[Ravenwood]

Definitely the last picture - it shows just the sort of life he wants.