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immybrookstud

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I have just reduced my girls pics again, i i reduce it any more i might at well give her away
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i have had very little serious interest could you please take a look at her ad and give me a few ideas of how i can improve it please

http://www.horsemart.co.uk/AdvertRef/HM8...HorseDetail.asp
 
in my opinion that first picture doesnt do her justice...it looks like she is straining against the lead rein and standing slightly odd....i would remove it..the other 2 are perfectly fine....

i would also start with the words:

Stunning SHP in the making...Thsi beautiful little mare needs someone to bring her forward into her true potential...etc etc

rather than reduced for a quick sale....
 
i like the first pic but don't like the 2nd as she looks all twisted. also the reduced for quick sale make it sound like you can't wait to get rid of her.
 
Sorry but section A's unless broken and going well or unless very well bred county level just don't seem to make any money.

She looks like a very sweet pony.
 
She isnt Sec A i have found my sec A's alot easier to sell than her gypsycob. i sould have sold her as a foal, had alot of interest then, but i wanted to keep her, but we just havent the time to show her, i guess people have gone of shp's in the last two years

i wouldnt class her as alot of money what do you think i should ask for her then?
 
well if i cant get that for her she can go out on summer grazing an my daughter can show her in plaits in a few years time. she is going to be better than her dad who sold for good money as a sat on 5yo
 
I never like it when someone says, 'pics don't do pony justice'. I tend to think, well take some that do then! Hope that doesn't sound too stroppy! Is there any way you could take some pics that do do her justice and use them? I think she has the potential to look really lovely BTW.
 
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