Help with Advert

[sallyellis]

Hi Guys

I have taken the hard decision to advertise my TB gelding for sale again due to me being pregnant and suffering with SPD which means I am undable to muck out or do any of the heavy work over the winter, you may remember I tried loaning him out which ended up a disaster so what do you think of my ad?

15.3hh Bright Bay gelding, 6 yrs old, very good looking and kind natured. Weatherbys passport came out of racing last spring as deemed too slow. Took to flatwork well and has excelled at dressage obtaining 4th, 2nd and 1st place in his only 3 outings.
Suitable for RoR classes as moves straight and has prescence.
Make super show hack/riding horse/dressage/endurance.
Up to date with Vaccs/worming/teeth and is good with farrier.
Super winter project for knowledgeable rider - only for sale as owner pregnant and has complications.

 

[Flicker]

Sounds good - all the info seems there. What's he like to hack, clip, load etc? If he's good, I would suggest you say so in the ad.
Would also suggest you put a photo with your ad where possible.
Good luck - I hope you find a nice home for him and all goes well with the baby.

 

[smiles24]

Has he done any jumping? might be worth mentioning.

he sounds lovely

 

[happihorse]

What level dressage was he competing in? Was it affiliated or unaffiliated?

Is he a novice ride, as I note you say 'for knowledgeable rider'?

Who is he by?

 

[sallyellis]

Thanks for that he is American bred very good lines and was imported as a yearling I have his breeding in his passport do you think I should include it in the advert? He has been competing unaffiliated dressage and no he isnt a novice ride as takes his confidence from the rider I will put that in the advert.