help with for sale advert please

lisaward

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can someone please help/edit my ad for me
i really want my pony to go to a good home and she is all the advert says she is.

lace is a black hackney x cob ,4yrs old approx 14hh mare lace is homebred from my hackney mare ruby which can be seen,ruby competed Bsja she is a fabulous pony with a totally genuine honest nature has been broken with no problems and has been professionally schooled weekly. lace is good in all 3 paces has started lateral work,hacks out alone and in company,rides and leads,brilliant in traffic. 100% in all ways. she has curently starting jumping and she has took it all in her stride and jumped all the jumps straight away when we took her to a recent schooling day. she has been shown in hand and came 1st in her class as lace has no permanent rider i feel she she needs to go and compete with someone and have some fun and i need to make way for this years foals. i would really love her to go to a competion/pc home as i can`t rate this pony highly enough,believe me if she were 15hh+ she wouldn`t be going anywhere we`d all be arguing over her here.!!!!
 
Hi
Looks fine...but you might want to put a guide price - or say something like 'Price in region of £blah - negotiable to the right home' or 'homes will be vetted'.
Hope this helps
S
 
14hh potential competition pony 'Lace'. Homebred 4yo black mare, hackney x cob. Dam herself successful BSJA and can be seen. This honest and genuine pony has 3 good paces, professionally schooled, hacks alone/company, 100% in all ways. Recently started jumping proving bold yet careful. A super prospect for capable teenager. Good home priority. £XXX
 
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