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<font color="blue">I have finally got my mare up on the horse exhange website for loan, after many attempts! Take a look and let me know what you think?...... I have never loaned, sold or advertised a horse before, so please let me know if there is anything I should or shouldn't have included. I don't want to encourage the 'wrong sort' to apply/contact about her!

http://www.thehorseexchange.com/AdvertsSQL.asp?ID=70734

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another 'absolutly stunning' horse
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hehe i keep seeing that phrase in adverts at the moment
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nice mare, seems genuine, i would like to see the types of scores and where in dressage, cause a 70% at hickstead has more impact then 70% at a small local riding school show.
 
<font color="blue"> Thank you. Should I change the 'Absolutely Stunning' bit then???? If this is a common phrase, would it put you off - suppose it is a bit like 'potential eventer' etc! </font>
 
<font color="blue"> I am wondering if keeping her fairly local is going to make it very hard to find anyone - as we are seriously restricting our potential loan homes. I had an email from a lady in Berkshire - 2 hrs away. But how do you keep tabs on them if they are miles away?
Also, she had been groom for an eventer years ago. So no real way of getting references from yards, vets, farrier etc.

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when i see 'potential eventer' makes me think that the horse spooks and jumps the nearest hedge to get away lol she is a lovely horse, if i wasnt in my final year of uni i would be very interested
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she is a beautiful horse. And yes, i would change the absolutly stunning bit, the theasarus on microsoft word is helpful if you need suggestions

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