How does this advert sound?

[xxkatejayxx]

My friend has updated her horses ad and was just wondering if it sounds ok?

17hh 11 year old Irish Sports Horse gelding. Hacks out sensibly alone and in company in open spaces and traffic. Well Schooled with wonderful free flowing paces. Doesn't hot up. Well mannered in and out of stable, No vices. Is good to shoe, box, clip. Lives in or out. Vaccinated, microchipped and wormed to date. Has done S/J,C/C and dressage. Won Diidi S/J Championship while with me and dicoveries/Dressage precious owner. A pleasure to own and will be sadly missed. Good home only please. Open to vet

 

[the watcher]

Did you mean precious owner?...or previous?

 

[crazyponys]

lol well spotted !!!!!!!!

 

[RedVendetta]

Got any more details on the 14.2hh? my mates looking for a pony.
Ad sounds good but whats a Diidi SJ championship?

 

[Acolyte]

Really picky I know but it is usually written as XC not C/C for cross country

Plus I don't know what the DiIdi SJ championship is (being an average horse person) so maybe explain this a bit or give an indication of what height was being jumped??

Just a couple of ideas though