How does this sound??

[Halfpass]

17hh IDx TB Chestnut Gelding - Genuine hunter will go out front or at back. Has done dressage, SJ and XC. Microchipped with passport. To include some tack. Good to shoe, box, clip, catch. Stunning horse with bold jump that just wants to hunt.

Not sure what else to write any ideas???

 

[serena2005]

hunting home only

 

[helenandshadow]

age?

 

[AmyMay]

Price??

 

[henryhorn]

It would put me off I'm afraid, stunning horse that just wants to hunt makes him sound incapable of anything else, and for all you know in other hands he could be different. I know you put has done the other things but was he successful? Also traffic and his age need to go in.
Sorry, not being super critical but if you want to sell him the ad needs to look better....

 

[Lobelia_Overhill]

I'd buy him, but I'm a non-hunter ... and it's always good to put a guide price (offers over) in an ad, or every tom dick and harry will be phoning to ask "how much?" oh, and roughly where you live to avoid the same thing - ah yes the joys of being a time waster!