I have made the changes.. what do you think now?

Had a quick look - looks good but one thing to make it look more professional - spell check everything. I noticed a couple of typos and to give that really crisp professional image you need to get rid of them. Well done with the website though - something I've never tried.

Also why not put in a link to the BE site as potential sponsors may like to look at results there?
 
The overall layout and appearance is very slick and professional. I really like the black&white homepage; it suits your horse very well.

All the information is clearly accessible, well organised, and concise. That's impressive.

However: at the moment you still have a great deal of spelling and grammatical errors. Also, there are often small typographical inconsistencies: some of your page links have a period at the end; some don't. Sometimes you shorten Cross-Country to XC, sometimes you shorten it to Xc. Spell-check alone won't find many of these little blips, so I would suggest you get someone who is a very good proof-reader to look it over for you. If you like, I could have a go myself later!
 
Just having a read through, it looks great so far and I agree with spookypony about your black and white homepage, it looks fab.

Proof reading:
on "About Me."

Maybe take the full stop of the title of the page?

On the question "What do you like most about eventing?" you need to change the spelling of difference.

On "who do you train with?" I Train for Eventing (I don't think you need capitals for train or eventing?) Or another suggestion is "My eventing trainers are; ..."


I hope that helps, there are very few mistakes and I'm sorry I don't have time to help with any more pages. Good luck!
 
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