HazellB
Well-Known Member
About six weeks ago I took a very nice TB ex-racer on loan as his owner couldn't afford him any more. He's lovely and perfectly usable, but I just wanted him as a pet to go with my WB mare and pony.
However, he's not happy with us so I need to help find him another home pretty quickly. Thing is, how do I make him sound as good as he really is when the fact is he looks so unhappy with us? Nobody will believe he's nice natured and kind when they see him at my place - he's bitten both of my mares to bits! He's never been a biter before and my mare has been bitten non-stop in every home she's had in the past - but that sounds such an unlikey story even I wouldn't believe it and I know both horses!
So, what sort of wording would you use in an advert offering him on loan?
For the record, he's 8, 16.2, flashy bay and had a knee injury that isn't a problem to him in normal use but stopped him racing. He's very sweet towards all humans, puts up with my annoying dogs like a saint and has always been fine with other horses. He's just bored as an unridden pet and stuck with a mare he feels to need to pick on.
Poor Rocky, he deserves a nice home with work .... but I can't seem to get that down in an advert.
However, he's not happy with us so I need to help find him another home pretty quickly. Thing is, how do I make him sound as good as he really is when the fact is he looks so unhappy with us? Nobody will believe he's nice natured and kind when they see him at my place - he's bitten both of my mares to bits! He's never been a biter before and my mare has been bitten non-stop in every home she's had in the past - but that sounds such an unlikey story even I wouldn't believe it and I know both horses!
So, what sort of wording would you use in an advert offering him on loan?
For the record, he's 8, 16.2, flashy bay and had a knee injury that isn't a problem to him in normal use but stopped him racing. He's very sweet towards all humans, puts up with my annoying dogs like a saint and has always been fine with other horses. He's just bored as an unridden pet and stuck with a mare he feels to need to pick on.
Poor Rocky, he deserves a nice home with work .... but I can't seem to get that down in an advert.