if anyone has a spare few mins....

Lovely website you got there, if i were to be very very picky i spotted one or two grammer mistakes on the about me page (who am I to judge
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haha!), also I would consider changing the font on this page to make it look abit more professional and maybe give it a background?
Love your gallery, and your blog, you got some lovely pics on there. Must have taken along time to make that site, I think its great and easy to use! Well Done and Good luck in finding some sponsorship!
 
I agree with Tuttlebum that this is a lovely easy site to use - you seem to have thought it out well.

I think it may be a good idea to get someone to proof read the site for you are there are a few spelling/grammatical mistakes which don't do a lot for the professional aspect of it, and you should at least get into the habbit of using a spellchecker.

I also noticed that many of the photo's have the originators copyright marks on them. I'm sure you have the permission to reproduce these, but how about asking the photographers if they would be interested in having a link to their sites on yours?

You could also put a little more information about you - including your age, other interests outside horses, and a photograph (not on a horse!) - it will make people and potential sponsors feel they know you better if they actually know what you look like.

Twizzy looks lovely and you look great together. It all made very interesting reading, and I will pop in again to see how you're getting on.

Good luck.
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Looks good, but you've used copyrighted images as your main ones which could really get you in trouble with the actual photographer. If I were you I'd also get someone to proof read the whol thing, put your results actually up so you can see them straight off and align all the things about Twizzy so they start from the same line. Otherwise, it looks good and is really easy to navigate and looks professional.
 
As above, but for your sponsors page I would stick to a really concise but strong list of things you can offer a sponsor.

Try to sell the opportunity to them a bit more, at the moment it sounds like you're asking for a favour - which isn't necessarily the case for the right local company - you could be a very good value way of getting their name about.

I'd pick sponsors to approach who are a) new or expanding b) local and c) the eventing/rural/crowd are their target market.

Play up what you're going to do - i.e. what big events have you got planned this year, how many spectators will be going to them, what national TV/news coverage will they get?

Lovely website - good job!
 
I agree with what is said above but it is a really lovely website! I really like your mare as well, i have her brother just down the road from you in east leake
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! Hehe only joking, wanted to PM and ask her breeding but then saw you dont accept PMs so figured i would post how lovely she looks here
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As above, a few gramatical things, e.g. on the sponsors page you say "there is many things" when it should be there are.
But overall a lovely website. Good luck eventing in 2010!
 
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