is my ad ok?

[Vicki_Krystal]

Ok so im going to advertise Lex very soon and was just jotting stuff down on paper.
Trying to keep it short and sweet!

16.1hh bay Hannoverian gelding. 6yrs old
Dressage bred by Fishermans Friend.
Lex was only imported last year and has been backed, broken and turned away.
He has amazing paces and movement with a fab hind leg action.
Before being turned away he was jumping small coloured fences and was hacking in company and was willing to go in front.
Loose jumps 1.20+ with a good shape and technique over a fence.
Increased work hours mean i have had to turn him away so he is currently wasted.
Good to handle, vet, farrier and dentist.
Will make a lovely Dressage / Event horse.


is that short enough???
it is so difficult to get across the points you want without waffling!!

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where is the best place to advertise him? Horsedeals? horsemart??

 

[Vicki_Krystal]

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does that mean its ok??

 

[Hemirjtm]

I think it sounds ok!! Advert would make me want to find out more!!

 

[shell1978]

Sounds good to me!

 

[NewHeights_SJ]

Sounds good, not to much waffle at all.

Horsedeals tend to have more competition type horses, and the prices tend to be higher. Depends what you want for him i guess. Horsemart isnt expensive to advertise on so why not stick him on both?

Get some decent pictures and hopefully he will sell quickly!

N xx

 

[dianchi]

Sounds fab! I would do both no harm in maximum exposure!

 

[Vicki_Krystal]

yay!
ive been tweeking at it for 20 mins and that was the shortest i could make it!!

i dont want to sell him though

i keep putting off advertising him!

 

[BroadfordQueen]

Sounds fab.
I would advertise him on horsequest, it's where you normally find the "quality horses".

 

[muddy_grey]

Sounds good
I agree might as well go for both. Horsemart has quite a lot of youngsters on and you get 3 pictures which is always good.

 

[zigzag]

What about his front leg movement

 

[Vicki_Krystal]

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What about his front leg movement

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oh he moves them well too!!!

 

[hellspells]

Yes its great - so great I'd definatly ring. He sounds lovely, just my type.

 

[little_flea]

Sounds good. Will you include the price?

 

[Vicki_Krystal]

i will in the actual ad!

 

[little_flea]

Great! He sounds like a lovely horse, and it is a good ad (though Hanoverian is with just one n)

Good luck.

 

[HorseS0S]

Why are you selling him?

 

[Hannahbone]

sounds good id wanna ring up just to ask more

 

[zoesophie]

Good advert, I think short and to the point is much much easier for people to read rather than waffling - hope he gets a good home.

PS - did u get my PM the other day?

 

[random_rider]

Good advert! I agree sounds perfect! Not too long or short

! Good luck selling him, he sounds fab!

 

[Vicki_Krystal]

thanks guys!

Dublin - yes i did - been very busy sorry for not replying that was naughty of me!

HorseSOS - i dont have the time he needs - i have 3 others and a full time job and as i jump and he is more dressage he is the one to go im afraid.