Loan Advert; is this ok?

[Forget_Me_Not]

Never loaned a horse, was just going to pop something up in the tackshp, have I missed anything?

 

[PeanutButterDragon]

Aw he looks a real sweetie!! I would perhaps add his age? But other than that it sounds good

 

[jewel]

i think it's really good, if only he was in cornwall i would have him for my daughter. he is just what i'm looking for

 

[sallyellis]

Your Ad is looking good, as already said I would put his age and whether or not he can be moved? Shame he cant be packaged up and sent to Bristol or I would love him for my girls.