Loan advert is this ok?

kombikids

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where is the best place to place a loan advert (pref for free) and is this ok? am after a confident novice for him and dont mind one up from a beginner... Only want the best for him as hes the most genuine chap you can get!


Lovely genuine chap for loan to right home.

16.3hh bay 11yr old ISH for loan, preferably to stay at yard in Herts. (possibility to move once relationship is built up)Great facilities- no roadwork hacking and indoor/outdoor schools, DIY or part livery.This horse has given me back all my confidence and made riding fun again after losing it all and not riding for 15 years!! I am after someone who will love him as much as I do - hes very affectionate and loves one to one time. He loves nice hacks and is very safe and sane at this - he is often used as an escort to other naughty/sharp horses on the yard. He is so good he will even walk calmly past a hedge cutter whilst its in action! He isnt a boring plod, hes really best for one up from a novice, maybe a busy mum returning to riding,a confident novice or as a hack for the husband!!! All the family ride him - even my husband and 3 year old child! He doesnt need riding every day and you can not ride him for a month and then get on it it doesnt bother him!

He is 100% to handle,(toddlers have even walked underneath him!)catch box and shoe,although he isnt keen on clipping but hes not really hairy enough to need this!! I am wanting to move on and compete and he needs a slower life and to make someone else as happy as he has made me!

Homes will be vetted and references sought as I only want the best for my boy!
 

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He sounds lovely. IMO the ad is a bit wordy and you could edit it a bit particularly the hacking bit, and the 'one up from a beginner' bit - maybe use the term 'competent novice' or confident novice'?

Try the website www.ridemyhorse.co.uk (the name has changed recently, but it will redirect you) for free loan ads.
 

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I'd leave it as is, if I were still looking for a loan, that ad tells me everything I wanted to know and he would be perfect for me!
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Awww he sounds awesome- shame you not just over the border in essex!!!! Love the add though you certainly sold him to me
 
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