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Potential WHP or Show Pony

Handsome 5yr old, 13hh, Chesnut Gelding by Ardenhall Missoni of Newoak Stud. Good to hack alone and in company, has hunted, and been lightly schooled over coloured poles. Suit confident child/lightweight adult.

Fantastic trainable temperament, he has also been long-reined and would also make a super driving pony. Good to load, shoe, catch, vet etc.

Teeth and saddle checked recently and vacs up to date.

Only for sale as I need something bigger. 5* home a must.
£2000 ONO (incl tack and rugs)

Now which pics do i use? I need 3. Please ignore petrified face of me in hunting pic it was my first time out!

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Gosh you're very tall!! Or do you just look it on pony?
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He's very nice, but IMO you need some moving ridden pics. First, second (although it's wonky and a bit cluttered in background) and last pics are my faves. If you get a good ridden (trotting) pic, then I'd use either 2 or last and the first headshot.
 
First,second and last.
ALthough if you can it would be worth taking some new shots for the add.
Side on stood nicely,trotting and headshot is a good mix to show the pony off.

Also,if you can it might be worth getting a ridden video on PC to send to potential buyers.More you can show them before they take a trip the better your chances of selling without 1001 people trying the pony.

Good luck
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im not really a fan of the first head shot i dont think it makes him look his best, i like the 2nd pic and the 6th and 7th pic alothough the background is slightly cluttered they would grab my attention. Ditto what som,eone else said about movement shot
 
2 and 7 as they show both sides for conformation..

but get a smaller rider on and take one trotting..

take out WHP/show pony

and good luck!!!
 
Ooooo, we're a right fussy bunch aren't we!! Obviously going for perfection here! I agree with the other poster - you need to get a littler bod to show your pony off to it's best. I like pic 2 the best out of all of them tho'.
 
I really like 5, 6 and 7 (using just 1 out of those) and then I would like to see some of him moving 1 of which should be ridden and would be nice to see one of him popping a fence.

Very handsome pony - I think he looks fantastic!
 
please choose whether you will advertise him as a potential show pony or a potential WHP as they are different builds, you could advertise as SHP/WHP as they are similar but SPs are totally different! Photo 5 is my fave, the others make his neck look very upside down
 
I like number 2. Agree that you need a small person on board, trotting. Then you need to decide whether you are advertising him as a potential WHP or Show Pony. Personally, I hate adverts that say "etc." As you haven't said he is good in traffic, I would immediately think he isn't - suspicious soul that I am.
He is a really stunning pony btw and I hope you find him a super home.
 
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