Opinions on my loan advert - I'm useless at this sort of thing!

[4leggedfurries]

Is there anyone willing to look at my loan advert and give me your honest opinion? I'm useless at this sort of thing so all advice greatly appreciated! If you are willing I will PM it over to you.

Thanks!

 

[Starbucks]

I will.

 

[Ali2]

Me too

 

[spotty_pony]

I will.