please will you help me with my ad?

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diggerbez

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i need help with my advert for my loan horse... (and no i'm not advertising before someone jumps on me...i just want to check it sounds ok)

HORSE FOR LOAN/PART LOAN

15.2 Ex racer, 14 years young available for loan to a kind and sympathetic person. Rocky would suit a confident happy hacker or someone for low level RC activities, although he is a bit rusty! He loves being ridden but i don't have the time and so he is wasted with me. He is good to hack and handle, although is not a novice ride- he does not, however, rear, buck or bolt. I would prefer him to stay on his current yard in Birtle, Bury but would consider a move to a local, approved home where he would have full year turnout and some company (he doesn't like being on his own!) Rocky is good with the farrier and vet but needs sedating for the dentist and for clipping. He loads and travels well in a box but doesn't like forward facing trailers. Please contact X on (phone no/email) if you would like some more details about this wonderful little horse
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what do you think?
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Im sure I was looking at your ad on new rider or something like that!? Was sooo tempted to ring up but I wasnt sure: Is it a loan or a part loan?
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possibly it was me
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. i was initially after a sharer but its proving difficult so i figure might get more calls if i was willing for him to move house (which i am really for the right person)...however if someone only wants a part loan i have another horse so its no big deal for me to still do him part of the time if that makes sense- its just the riding i haven't got time for and the cost
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Aahh, would love to part loan but I dont think Id be suitable for your horse! Im definately not a novice but I am only 13 years old, 5'8'' part loaned a 16.1hh id x tb and a 15.3hh cob x tb before, been riding for 5 years but only in the last two years have started 'proper riding': dressage and showing
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i guess i could do... need to try and find one suitable. most of the pics i have of him are eventing ones, don't mind him doing a bit of jumping but want a quieter home really, not lots of competing...only a bit of low level stuff....
 
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Aahh, would love to part loan but I dont think Id be suitable for your horse! Im definately not a novice but I am only 13 years old, 5'8'' part loaned a 16.1hh id x tb and a 15.3hh cob x tb before, been riding for 5 years but only in the last two years have started 'proper riding': dressage and showing
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the only problem would be that my yard is a bit funny about under 18s not being supervised by an adult....
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I think your ad sounds good. I would think youwill get quite a lot of interest. Would agree with Lucy a photo would be great if you could find one you are happy with.

Good luck with finding him a lovely loaner
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I think your ad sounds good. I would think youwill get quite a lot of interest. Would agree with Lucy a photo would be great if you could find one you are happy with.

Good luck with finding him a lovely loaner
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thanks
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